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Netanella
Feb 02, 2014 rated it did not like it
I had to DNF this book at xv% - too many editorial and grammatical boo-boo's for me to proceed going. Although I know that many of the reviews on this site stated the story was great but the editing sucked, I just couldn't do information technology. Life is likewise curt to read a book with this many errors. If information technology'southward not publication-ready, then don't put information technology out there. Just maxim. I had to DNF this book at 15% - too many editorial and grammatical boo-boo's for me to keep going. Although I know that many of the reviews on this site stated the story was great but the editing sucked, I just couldn't do information technology. Life is besides brusque to read a book with this many errors. If information technology'south non publication-ready, then don't put it out there. But saying. ...more
Lori
Jan 03, 2015 rated information technology it was amazing
Zombie apocalypse /good book

Ok then if you've ever read any of my reviews on zombie books you know their not my favorite only I do obviously read them. Picky as I am about them on try to find ones different .
This one isn't much dissimilar from your apocalyptic books. People on the run to safe daily moving almost from town to town or city to city, state to land. Aforementioned former aforementioned one-time.
This one is well written a few mistakes but non a deal breaker. And definitely as well well written as in grammar correct.

Zombie apocalypse /skilful book

Ok and then if you've ever read any of my reviews on zombie books y'all know their not my favorite but I do plain read them. Picky as I am about them on endeavor to find ones different .
This ane isn't much different from your apocalyptic books. People on the run to safety daily moving about from town to town or city to city, state to country. Same old same onetime.
This one is well written a few mistakes but not a deal breaker. And definitely also well written as in grammar correct. Too correct. If you lot no what I mean.
Information technology's told from Abbys eyes. A sixteen twelvemonth one-time stuck with her sister ava after their father us turned but not before he tells them to go packs up supplies for them and tells them to go to their mothers 4hrs away.
They never go far being attacked by a crazy women but getting away then stuck trapped in a bath at a gas station about to be eaten when saved by a family group of ex military machine except Jeremiah the son. He's about 22, 23. Abby and Jeremiah get separated and from the family while out on a supply ringtone awry . They return to the family gone. Ava her petty 6year old sis fine with them. All she can recall u.s.a. to go home that's where she is and she needs to. E with her sure her mother is dead too. Boyfriend Conner she assumes is dead after they find out out the Z Virus started.
She quickly starts having feeling for Jeremiah and has sexual activity with him, more then once.
Then finally upon returning finally to Abbys house and no ane being there but his parents vehicle she starts to think their all dead and I'm assuming Jeremiah thinks his parents are. The program existence become to Virginia to a cabin his parents own. Simply when their apace over run by zombies and so become stuck in a motorcar that won't commencement they remember their done for. When shots ring out and it's approximate who ....Conner and Marshall. Abbys beau and Jeramiahs dad.

They become back to connects where they discover the family ,all simply Abbys mom to find a big not skillful surprise.
No not telling.
And then I'd say this volume Is much the aforementioned as most zombie books. Blood, Gore, rotting flesh, stinky people, whacked out people killing each other when not many are left to begin with and the need to survive.
Oh and let'south not leave out the military safety havens that card never condom. It's only a given.

And then it's not a bad book all in all. I mean if your really into them you'll similar this volume. If you hate bewilderment ending you'll detest this book unless book ii is out crusade information technology'due south a biggie.
But I'd daybreak it. It that long but nit curt either so it's a perfect in between.
Only kinda gets annoying how the garment is so correct your thinking she's sixteen who talks like that and Jeremiah also.
The book mainly focus on those two
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Oh but I will be reading the next bookcase if the ending being so sharp and off the wall annoying . Simply also cause I tin can't await to run into how this plays out her telling Conner who's she'due south been dating forever that she's slept with a dude she's merely McKenzie what a month!
Yea this should be expert.
Read on and enjoy.

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Sarah Stuart
Feb 28, 2019 rated it really liked it
This is the first of the new moving ridge of zombie novels I've read that really has a believable way a devastating disease could exist spread fast throughout America, and it makes the story terrifyingly believable.

Abby, and her much younger sister, say goodbye to Mom. They are off to spend a calendar week with Dad, but will they render on Christmas Eve as planned? Abby hopes so; she'll miss her beau, Connor, and she's still cross with Dad for divorcing Mom.

A sad, but very normal, family state of affairs, just Mom'due south

This is the start of the new wave of zombie novels I've read that actually has a believable way a devastating disease could be spread fast throughout America, and it makes the story terrifyingly believable.

Abby, and her much younger sister, say goodbye to Mom. They are off to spend a week with Dad, but will they return on Christmas Eve every bit planned? Abby hopes so; she'll miss her boyfriend, Connor, and she's still cantankerous with Dad for divorcing Mom.

A deplorable, merely very normal, family unit situation, only Mom's terminal words come dorsum to haunt Abby over and over – "go along spotter on Ava" – when their globe is invaded by the undead and nowhere is prophylactic. Even the military's efforts fail and it'southward kill or be killed for the few isolated survivors.

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Kathy
Nov 04, 2017 rated information technology liked it
Could be good

I enjoyed the story line of the book. The author had the correct idea only sadly it was poorly written and needed a good editor. I empathize every author has to offset somewhere simply I do think the author tin get through this book and do some rewrites. Or have some beta readers.

Jennifer
Feb 06, 2014 rated information technology actually liked information technology
I want to starting time by maxim that regardless of some of the bug I had with the writing and grammer in this book, the story itself was amazing. I would call information technology more New Developed, equally opposed to Immature Adult, only it was engaging no matter what your age.

Editing is a large upshot for me – and evidently many others – so I rate each volume on a ane - x scale (1 being the to the lowest degree amount of errors, 10 existence, "wtf are they talking near?"). I give this one a 5. There are quite a bit of errors in the beginning, but

I desire to start past maxim that regardless of some of the problems I had with the writing and grammar in this book, the story itself was amazing. I would telephone call it more than New Adult, as opposed to Young Adult, but it was engaging no affair what your historic period.

Editing is a big result for me – and apparently many others – and then I rate each volume on a one - x scale (1 beingness the least amount of errors, 10 existence, "wtf are they talking most?"). I give this 1 a 5. There are quite a bit of errors in the beginning, but they practise thin out a bit as you go along. There were only a few times I really had to reread a judgement to try to figure out what was being said. But no doubt, it needed editing.

The other issue I have that I find even more annoying than the lack of editing is when the writer constantly uses excessively proper speech in their characters conversations. People don't speak that way in everyday conversation and at that place is naught wrong with using contractions. Sometimes it is more effective to use each word individually, only in virtually cases, it'southward not necessary. I kept hoping that particular issue would get amend as the story went on, simply it didn't. Fifty-fifty then, this story was interesting enough that I tried to ignore it and just correct those words in my head every bit I read along.

My last complaint is near the paragraphs and their length. Offset of all, use them. On average a paragraph tin range from one sentence to seven. Though opinions may vary on that, I think that holds more often than not true for novel authors. Still, it doesn't consist of folio later on page of non-stop sentences. Break them upward for crying out loud. It makes it very hard to follow where you are. And if you expect away for a second, forget it. You'll have to reread half the folio to find where you lot left off. That is ane matter I noticed new authors exercise a lot, but it'south not a bargain breaker. And information technology didn't stop me from finishing this story.

As for the story itself, I really loved it. I thought Abby's graphic symbol was a pretty accurate delineation of how a 16 year old girl might handle herself in the zombie apocalypse. She didn't become from high school student to zombie slayer over nighttime. In the start, she merely ran. And really, who wouldn't. She didn't practise crazy stunts, trying to stop and salve everyone she saw in problem, knowing she just couldn't. Her sole focus was her little sister and getting her and her sister home to her female parent and Connor, her high school sweetheart.

Along the mode, she meets up with another grouping of survivors that consist mostly of a family. I thought that each of those characters was well written and I loved all of them. Peculiarly Jeremiah. He too was written in a realistic manner that fabricated him very endearing. They had a lot of obstacles along the way. Of form, that's expected. It is the zombie apocalypse. This story did become a bit predictable though. It got to the betoken that you could tell right before something would happen considering the author would basically say, "ok, it's all articulate," then, "oh wait, at present we're in another predicament." In some way'south it was too clearly written that there would exist a problem or an assail, they went through the motility, fixed the problem then moved on to the next. Sometimes information technology was just too cut and dry. But over all progressed well.

I remember the only reason I'1000 being so critical of the writing itself is because I really did enjoy the story and would like to see the next one clear upwards a few of the issues that this 1 had. If I hadn't liked the story so much I probably wouldn't give a crap virtually these bug.

Then the bottom line is that information technology's worth the read and I intend to get the next volume when it comes out. And for those of y'all who take problems with cliffhangers, this has one. I may have waited for the next book to release before starting this ane if I had known that.

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Jessica Kong
My Devouring Dear: The First Weeks by Donna Neville-Theiler is not a bad read. I am more than of a romance reader at heart, meaning I adopt reading books where the master characters are faithful to each other to the end. Temptation is one thing, merely when you follow through with that temptation that'south where you lose me. In that location is besides much cheating in the real globe, which is why I prefer the fictional earth to be better. Secondly, the story can benefit from more action, suspense, and gory descriptions. My Devouring Love: The First Weeks by Donna Neville-Theiler is not a bad read. I am more of a romance reader at heart, meaning I adopt reading books where the main characters are faithful to each other to the end. Temptation is one thing, but when you follow through with that temptation that's where yous lose me. In that location is too much cheating in the existent world, which is why I prefer the fictional earth to exist ameliorate. Secondly, the story can benefit from more action, suspense, and gory descriptions. It's a bit bland. ...more
P.S. Winn
I enjoyed this book and the writing style. It is sad that at that place are and so many Zombie books out and it is hard to tell 1 story from some other. I did similar the writing style and thought the author did a peachy job telling a story with adventure, suspense a a impact of romance as Abby and her sis Ava are living through the zombie apocalypse and trying to get back home. I hope to read something else by this author that is not a zombie book because I think this was a skilful read and shows a talented auth I enjoyed this volume and the writing style. It is sad that there are so many Zombie books out and it is hard to tell one story from another. I did like the writing manner and idea the author did a great job telling a story with adventure, suspense a a affect of romance as Abby and her sister Ava are living through the zombie apocalypse and trying to become back dwelling. I promise to read something else by this author that is non a zombie book considering I think this was a good read and shows a talented writer. ...more
Kimberly
Jul 25, 2014 rated it really liked information technology
I wasn't for certain what to expect when I started reading this volume, I accept never read a Zombie book earlier.
I loved the characters, I idea the story was keen. If not for so many grammatical errors throughout the whole volume this would accept been a perfect well written 5 star volume! Definitely should have been edited, and if it was edited so I would discover someone else to exercise that job, crusade they obviously didn't exercise their chore correct. Hope the story continues besides as this book did.
I wasn't for sure what to await when I started reading this book, I take never read a Zombie volume before.
I loved the characters, I thought the story was groovy. If not for so many grammatical errors throughout the whole book this would take been a perfect well written 5 star book! Definitely should accept been edited, and if it was edited then I would find someone else to practise that task, cause they obviously didn't do their job correct. Hope the story continues as well as this book did.
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Stephanie Bates
The reason I rate this and then high is because I think the characters are relatable and realistic. The main graphic symbol can be annoying but yous take to take her historic period into consideration.
If this situation happened in real life, I believe wholeheartedly that we would cling to someone for back up.
This was the beginning Zombie book I ever read, so I was on the edge of my seat through the whole book.
Lorena
February 06, 2014 rated it information technology was amazing
I was going to give this four stars because of how desperately edited the book was BUT I simply found out Amazon volition be releasing a new version before long. The characters were believable and just enough gore and zombie horror to go along me reading all dark long. I tin't wait for the adjacent book. :) I was going to give this four stars because of how badly edited the book was But I just establish out Amazon will be releasing a new version soon. The characters were believable and merely enough gore and zombie horror to continue me reading all night long. I can't wait for the adjacent book. :) ...more than
Anne
Aug 11, 2014 rated it information technology was amazing
smashing series love story and zombies defo 5 stsar read
At least I read
I love a good zombie volume.

Lots of action in a fast-paced world of zombies. Kept me wanting to read more. I practise hate cliff hangers though!

Ernesto Oporto
A Very Good Read

A zombie apocalypse well written. At that place are plenty of twists and surprises to keep the reader turning the pages. Improve than other similar books. The best one yet.

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